Dai Sharkey Project one 14.07.12
My thoughts…..I’ve
just split the 12 songs recorded into 3 ep’s.
project one – all
the acoustica
project two – all
the madness
project me – all the
rest
my thoughts listening
to WAVs on headphones.
Project 1.
Anymore.
Slightly over
compressed but what a powerful song. Nice one Rich.
I love you.
Track a bit quieter
than the last. Vocals have great tenderness. Need to automate a volume drop on
the high “love you” at the end of the 1st chorus.
BVs could go up a
notch. Beautiful. Harmonics need a clean one as well as an effected one.
My love is free.
Vocals could be a
bit less harsh, rounder. Sounds live, sweet. Main riff could be louder. Maybe
drop some of the percussive stuff in m8. Much, much better than the last mix.
Paradise.
A little over
compressed, vox and all over. Sweet soundscape stuff, nice. Feels a bit linear.
Needs more room. What a song, sounds great.
Project 2.
Insane planes.
Too much phasing on
BVs. Too much compression on mix, space is squashed a bit. Nice bass. Think new
BVs could drop in the mix a bit and maybe lose a few to stop repetition.
Otherwise…mad song, great.
Rock paper scissors.
Cool start. Turn up
mix on lead vox echo. Still feels a little over compressed. 2nd
chorus has much more space. Hows that? It’s lush.
Smack Daddy.
Wow, what a start.
No need for first woosh. Lead vocals are over gated. I still think the guitar should stay in the
chorus mix. Nice space. Ducks…lmao. Bass
effect before 2nd chorus and ending needs an octave above note too,
to cut the mid range with the groove it creates. Loops at end only need 3
before the smack daddy bit. End horns need to cut more and carry on beyond the
end. String loop needs to come in later and have a spoken word part put over it
to fade. Amazing song. Where’s the backing vox?
Promise.
Bring main guitar in
earlier and less reverb. Less reverb on strings and drop volume. Chorus needs a
double time snare hit, it sounds like a ballad.
Dodgy cymbal hit
before last chorus. Nice ending.
Project me.
Dogfish.
All changed now but
I do like this mad mix. Suppose the fans will love a never released version
when I’m dead.lol
He Said
The mix is dated
31.05. Not the latest one.
Honey
Raise guitar volume
at intro, or is it a low mix volume?. Repeat bass pattern before 1st
chorus. Pull out lead vox on “down, down “ repeats.
Remove extra hisses
after 2nd chorus – “cross”
Sounds fantastic.
Really pleased.
No More
Great start. Leave
out some of the rim-shots on 1st verse. Lead vox sound great. Wow,
great mix. Raise vox in m8 and ending. Clean up riff guitar on outro. Move
speaking part later in ending. Brilliant mix.